Writing Exam: Formal letter

C/Carme, 37                                                                                                                    C/Verdi, 34
08343                                                                                                                                       08923
Barcelona                                                                                                             Sta. Coloma de Gr.



Dear Mr/Mrs,

I am writing to complain about the loud music that you put in your  shop, sometimes it seems a disco and not a shop and it is annoying.

When I enter in a shop of course I want to hear some music because it makes me feel more comfortable, but the moment that I entered in your shop I was appalled by the stronger and louder music ever. Maybe there is a middle pint between my opinion and yours.

If you just turn down a little the music I would be very gratefull and I know for sure that I am not the only client who thinks that, so maybe you should revise this point and reconsider your opinion if you don't want to lose a client.

I hope to llok foward from you in a near future, the music it is not an extra thing, it is important to put it right.

Yoursfaithfully,

Maria Rosa Pintor Borrego

Martin's formal letter

To the owner of (shop name):

My client and I (Mr. Silent Soul and Mr. Angry Attorney, respectively) request you to read our letter and inmediately take action upon our requests, so we avoid going to court.

As you might have noticed due to recent complains, we are writing this letter to inform you about the current sound levels in your shop and urge you to change it.

We believe it is atrocious for you to keep the volume at, more or less, 100dB. We firmly believe that, in order to have a full, pleasant customer experience, the music shall be at, at least, 120dB. Some call it "mind-blowing" or "ear-destroying", but we call it "I am so bored I am falling asleep". Therefore, in order to be able to shake our bodies with recreational purposes (also known as "dancing"), we request you to kindly turn the volume up (or, as my client said, I quote, "turn the goddamn volume up, would you?").

I am writing this letter with the best of my intentions, but my client has a strong passion for appropiately loud music; therefore, I will fight my way to court if that is what you wish, only to get those (I quote my client) "sweet sweet drops" and that (I quote again) "soul-smashing bass".

Yours sincerely,

Mr. Angry Attorney

(in representation of)

Mr. Silent Soul

Barcelona, Spain

31st Feb 3016

Formal letter, Ronaldo and Aitor

The Weight Loss Collection S.A                                                             Ronaldo and Aitor
267 Regent street                                                                                     Prat de la Riva Street
London                                                                                                     Sta Coloma de Gramenet
W13QT                                                                                                    5 April 2016


Dear Sir/Madame

We're writing to complain about te sexist content of your advertisement of the creme, "the weight loss collection".

Although we are believers in freedom of expressions, we don't think that this is the correct way to advertise your product because it can provoke or creates complexes in women that are not too satisfied with their bodies. We think that your advertisement promotes an stereotype  of beautiful woman that isn't true because the beauty of a woman is not the same for all people. Not all women that won't to go to beach have to have this body.

We look forward to hearing from you in the near future and thanks for your attention.

Your Faithfully

Aitor Ortíz, Ronaldo Naula

Formal Letter

Ryanair Centre                                                                              13 Wilson, St. Coloma the Gramanet

355 Lincoln Street                                                                                                            April 04 th, 2016

London

 

Dear Mr. Ryan,

I am writing to complain about the Ryanair company, which was advertised in Cabin crew charity calendar.

I am very disappointed with this type of advertising because encourages sexuality and could be considered sexist. Although I am a firm believer in freedom of expression, I was appalled by the way that called the attention of the consumer.  I think it is not appropriate to show scantily clad hostesses.

While I accept that one latter is unlikely to make you change the advertising campaign, I can assure you there are many people and mothers who think the same as me.  I really like that you reconsider your advertising company a less illicitly.

I look forward to hearing from you in the near future and I hope that you change your marketing strategy.

Yours faithfully,

Estela Molina

Formal Letter: Offensive advertisement

PETA                                                 Prat de La Riba
269 Regent Street                           Santa Coloma de Gramenet
London                                                  5 April 2016
WZ 3QT

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complain about the offensive content that I found in your advertisement, which has been seen on a billboard.

Although I am a firm believer in freedom of expression, I think that the message that your company transmits can be very offensive to people with overweight.

I understand that your company supports vegetarian food but I think that this is not the way to promote it. In your advertisement you are judging people by their life style.

I look forward to hearing from you in the near future and I hope that you will reconsider your advertising strategy.

Yours faithfully,

Loli Pascual

Formal letter

Formal Letter

Advertisement of used cars (BMW)